Friday, June 22, 2007

- Today - Comments

Rating: 3.4

(inspired by John Latham's art, 'The N-U Niddrie Heart')

I awoke in a stream of rays,
laid my Pregnant Survivor’s Manual
...
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Ben Gieske
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Edward Kofi Louis 24 October 2015

Yesterday is gone! And, there is always today. Thanks for sharing.

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Luz Hanaii 26 August 2011

Short and inviting to positiveness. What do you know. this thing finally let me comment.

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Ivor Hogg 21 August 2009

Today is all we have Ben yesterday is gone and tomoorow may not happen

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Dave Dunn, aka Rhumour 08 July 2009

A very neat capture of your views on today - I confess I tend to be more verbose most of the time :) Best wishes Dave

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Sarwar Chowdhury 05 July 2009

Ammmmmazing! penned beautifully! 10+

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Saadat Tahir 04 July 2009

life is to learn.. the world holds many great moments for us all.. inspiration...devotion Nicely written.. great cheers

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Sameer Ahmed 06 June 2009

The best changes often start as a single, simple thought at the beginning of every new day. Think big, and discover the ways to make every day count........10/10

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Lady Grace 04 June 2009

today may not as good tomorrow..maximize what you have today..grace

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Naseer Ahmed Nasir 16 March 2009

A thematic and inspirational poem. ' Today is the day ' is the essence of the poem. Good work, Ben. Keep it up. Best wishes Naseer

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Naidz Ladia 11 March 2009

be contented to what we have today..be happy with it, , tomorrow might not same as today.. this piece is written in few lines but the meaning is so great..cheers naizz

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Chitra - 09 December 2008

Fantastic piece, indelible in meaning and expression

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Egi David Perdana 30 October 2008

hii mr. ben this poem very inspirated to me, you are great and this poem very good

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Sarwar Chowdhury 24 October 2008

.....compact, thoughtful composition. The style of expression I liked......10+++++

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David Desantis 03 October 2008

ive said this before and ill say it again...i love your style ben..its very unique and brings alot of imagery with it...perfect man 10/10

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<font color =fusha>Amy 13 September 2008

Great poem. for one person, you're very talented. Fantastic piece- keep it up

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Tanya Stanford 26 August 2008

short, impactful and with a sense of humour. loved it.

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Subbaraman N V 18 July 2008

Let every day be a 'today'! A great write!

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Seema Chowdhury 03 July 2008

your ideas nicely penned.

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Janri Gogeshvili 07 May 2008

Sensitive the touch genetic with 'field' … is beautiful and figurative … Thanks...

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John Tiong Chunghoo 27 April 2008

dear ben, thanks for spending time with my poetry. i like the element of this poem. you pull us into your moment. today i just sit to let the minutes pass

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