What if you went to bed
Slept 9 hours
Opened your eyes
And saw total darkness
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Such profound wording and some spectacularly wise thoughts. Masterful :)
Succinct. Profound. And deeply moving. Thoroughly enjoyed it, Mary Lisa. Definitely a BIG 10! Along a similar theme, you might enjoy If Tomorrow Never Comes...
Wow! ! ! Very Deep And Powerful! ! ! Write! ! ! Wonderfully Said! ! ! Thank You For Sharing! ! ! 10SSSSSSSSSSSSS
Wonderful poem, we take so much for granted and don't realize how short life really is and how fast things can change.
You nailed it Christopher...change marches on even if you want everything to stay stagnant in life. We are just candles hoping not to blow out too early...
Very true. Yesterday is history, tomorrow is mystery while today is a gift from Him and hence, it is called present. One must make the optimum use of today to live a meaningful and worthy life. Thanks for sharing.10 points.
A candle Standing between you And darkness Forever dancing And flickering In the tango of A fully lived Life... Today Beautiful poem. Thank you poet for sharing it.10 for it.
wow such a stunning sharing i like it, keep it up :)