Tuesday, March 15, 2016

Today Comments

Rating: 5.0

Yesterday is but a haze
soon forgotten mild malaise
blur of sights and silent sounds
swirling, whirling, going round
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Liilia Talts Morrison
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Khairul Ahsan 29 March 2016

How beautifully you've compared today with yesterday and tomorrow! 'Days to come a mystic stage players of the play invade' - I'm amazed by this mystic vision of yours. 'far off morrow never comes yesterday beats distant drums.' - oh so beautifully said! Loved the expression. The graphic suits so well with the poem! Very nice.

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Margaret O Driscoll 15 March 2016

Liilia, you have a wellspring of wonderful ways with words, 'days to come a mystic stage' and 'yesterday beats distant drums', such an enjoyable poem!

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Laura Arwen 15 March 2016

I love it. It's so soft

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