Tuesday, September 15, 2015

Today! Comments

Rating: 4.7

Today is my day, you won't see me cry,
Let life throw stones at me as it goes by,
I shall not flinch or cry out in pain,
Sadness must retreat, with nothing to gain
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Lora Colon
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Bri Edwards 27 September 2015

“And I'll delay the setting of the sun Until the sweet hymn of the lark is done” I love birds as well, I think. will you also stop the lunar eclipse tonight? I’ll know it’s your doing if it happens (not) . :) “I dare anyone to get in my way! Do you hear me world? Today is my day! ” I Hear You! You may dare me as much as you might, but I’m afraid you’d put up a Hell of a fight. Today is your day and you’re filled with might. I dare not get in your way; I’ll stay out of sight! ! ! your inspiring words shall be enshrined in MyPoemList tonight. loved it. keep on truckin’! bri :) p.s. this poem or probably any other of yours is welcome, nay encouraged, to join mine and others in my/our October “showcase for PH poets”, found on my PH sight. I look forward to your offering. I’ve just sent out some invitations. this note shall serve as your invitation.

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Kassem Oude 15 September 2015

Sublime You replace pains of heart by joy Up last ladders' tops you sublime Of your broad heart ocean is coy Like sun shines on world all time.

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Liza Sudina 15 September 2015

Today is my day! - every day is a GIFT of God! we need eyes to see it! Well done! ! !

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Shankaran Kutty 15 September 2015

Beautiful Poem... So pregnant with positivity. Fantastic Rhyming too....

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Dan Reynolds 15 September 2015

You tell them, Nicely written.

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Lora Colon

Lora Colon

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