Tuesday, July 28, 2009

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Today...
I've seen through you...
Your vulnerable moment...
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Iryne Ho K. N.
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Afzal Shauq 06 August 2009

Emptiness... Wandered in mind... Like a lost kid in the jungle... Calling for help in your eyes... Weak at the knees grabbing tightly... The time i shook your hands... wow a romantic way of writing..liked this poem.. the way you done is really perfect and heart feeling one.. well done.. the verses are inter linked very professionally, , , means you are a good poet..with rich ideas..10/10

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Iryne Ho K. N.

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