Tuesday, December 16, 2014

Toast And Jam Comments

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Every day seems to be the same,
I listen to the whine of an overhead plane.
The sound of children playing in the street,
and the pounding of many passing feet.
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Kaila George 21 December 2014

Wow this is just brilliant I love how you flow over the period of time and it sounds so natural when it comes to the last few lines brilliantly written....wow.

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