Monday, June 24, 2013

...To Young Love Comments

Rating: 4.8

Your love is like a little child
Impish, prankish
My world is too fragile
It can’t sustain any brandish
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Yasmin Khan
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Akhtar Jawad 15 May 2014

A beautiful poem with a moral, really liked it.

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Yash Shinde 29 April 2014

Love is sweet as honey But dear are the faiths Set by elders and family That let us live in grace True lines...........can we pay back love and care that our parents have given us? .......... A poignant and heartfelt write

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Heather Wilkins 29 June 2013

love is sweet as honey. but dear are the faiths. nice thoughts.

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David Wood 27 June 2013

It is by grace and love that we shall live. Nice poem Jasmeen.

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Shahzia Batool 27 June 2013

But dear are the faiths Set by elders and family That let us live in grace... So nice a write! ! ! ! ! !

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David Wood 24 June 2013

True love lets you live in grace and overcome all obsticles.

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Yasmin Khan

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