Monday, February 13, 2012

To You My Valentine…14-2 12 Comments

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(to far off isles … to bob on shores… sealed with a kiss)

Hey!
An angel whispered me.
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Shihabudheen K J 26 May 2012

All kinds of fantasy feeling for me.might be great reality for lovers.good write

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Kasia Fedyk 24 May 2012

So sensual and so abundant in vision. On the wings of love we fly. Beautiful. Thank you! :)

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Adeline Foster 09 May 2012

Interesting format here, and it does work. Lovely. Adeline

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I like the way you make the words cohisive and so smooth, I can tauch the smoothness and the flexibility in this poem.

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Sally Plumb Plumb 23 February 2012

A lovely, light piece of writing. Best regards Sally. (try Valentine when you have a spare minute)

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Unwritten Soul 19 February 2012

it's a nice humping jumping rhythm... beautiful write for your valentine :) New way too, it's different than other poem you have written :) I am so sure you adore azure words too much...ubiquitous in any poem of yours.. Keep happy always_Unwritten Soul

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Dave Walker 13 February 2012

A really great poem, like it. A great poem.

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