Monday, September 21, 2009

To You(I Think...) Comments

Rating: 5.0

I called out to you,
my voice rising above my thudding heart,
crushing like waves on enchanted emotional sea's.
I thought you heard.
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Peya Jakob
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God Peya, what can I say? This poem is sooooo amazing with its picturesque imagery. It blows me away somewhere else to your voice as it rises as does the sea, the story unfolding like a staircase down from the stars. The colors, the touch, the sounds with screams and orchestra all add to its intensity. So very well done my dear Peya.....10+++++++love Karin

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