Friday, May 1, 2020

To You I Come Comments

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I come to your dawn
In you I find the part of awakening

I come to your noon
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MAHTAB BANGALEE
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Bharati Nayak 30 January 2022

I come to your dream In you I discover the sun to implement the hymn I come to your scarf In you I find the clouds to quench the thirst---A mesmerizing poem!

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me poet yeps poet 27 January 2022

AND I COME TO P H AND seemy poems you are reading great poeming mb of bd

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Sultan Deen 25 February 2021

Birth and death playing nothing to our butterfly Our love graciously agreed to lose together in sky /// beautiful romantic poem penned; let it be romantic rock

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Mac Che 28 January 2021

the ultimate peace of life in the trance of love that's why everyone seeks the love and love comes to love

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Mac Che 28 January 2021

in love everything is harmonious - that's why I come to you~

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Moore Noore 28 January 2021

the last couplet Birth and death playing nothing to our butterfly /Our love graciously agreed to lose together in sky~ superb lovely

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Moore Noore 28 January 2021

nowhere love goes; love comes to the love to build up a great companionship

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Luo Zhihai 09 January 2021

I come to your dream It should be wonderful to enter other people's dreams!

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Luo Zhihai 09 January 2021

I come to your dream

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Dr. Antony Theodore 03 January 2021

I come to your dawn In you I find the part of awakening I come to your noon In you I find the life of busy working I come to your evening In you I find the part of lamp to lit up--- I am on my way. i am always coming. wonderful tony

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me poet yeps poet 27 December 2020

but to me after new formultion u have not come

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 22 December 2020

excellent sorry I missed it Thanks to those who will give me invaluable time and plenty of votes in my writings after this comment nice 1 mb of bd thanks for reading me

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Dr Antony Theodore 07 December 2020

I come to your dawn In you I find the part of awakening I come to your noon In you I find the life of busy working I come to your evening In you I find the part of lamp to lit up You are becoming a mystic my dear Mahtab. thank you. tony

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Savita Tyagi 03 December 2020

So beautifully written. Togetherness in love is what makes life beautiful.

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Dr Antony Theodore 01 November 2020

I come to your dawn In you I find the part of awakening. In your shadow I find my happiness In your breath I find my lungs easiness. to lose together in the skies. what a wonderful expression my dear Mahtab. thank you. tony

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Akhtar Jawad 22 October 2020

Life is due to love, and it's for love. A great poem on love.

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Dr Antony Theodore 29 September 2020

I come to your dream In you I discover the sun to implement the hymn very very poetic. wonderful images. thank you dear poet. tony

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Suresh Kumar Ek 18 September 2020

the poem reflects the real harmony of love

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Soran M. H 10 August 2020

there are very unique metaphors and new descriptions for love, teach us howto find a new life and hope in love, brilliant piece of work it deserves 10+

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Soran M. H 10 August 2020

Birth and death playing nothing to our butterfly Our love graciously agreed to lose together in sky

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