Tuesday, March 17, 2009

To You From Me Comments

Rating: 4.3

As day light breaks through equal bliss,
I look at my fingers and hands,
Expecting them to write anything, just anything,
Anything to do with how I feel for you.
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Emma Jane Pearson
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Jayatissa K. Liyanage 07 September 2017

A genuine hearty relationship and a solid bondage between two souls are portrayed excellently. Congrats for being the member's PoD. X

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Edward Kofi Louis 07 September 2017

I'll always be able to forgive! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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The best relationship is when someone(s) can be themselves and still be good friends..a ten

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Anil Kumar Panda 07 September 2017

When something goes wrong between two hearts and still the memories remain strong. A very heartfelt poem. True love never dies. I speak to you every day, but somehow, We always end up playing the same old game. We talk of “how your day’s was and other events, But I always wonder if there’s more to say, Something which, I’m hiding from you....speaks how the heart yearns for love. Congrats.

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Bill Cantrell 07 September 2017

Homesick for a place that doesn't exist.....this line stands out to me as bright as the sun, such true and gentle but at the same time strong love is expressed perfectly in this poem

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Subhas Chandra Chakra 07 September 2017

whatever between us, I’ll always be able to forgive, and never forget you. Because without you around, It’s like feeling homesick the whole time Nicely penned poem. It speaks on its own. 10++

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Anita Aparajita Das 07 September 2017

And finally, whatever between us, I’ll always be able to forgive, and never forget you. Because without you around, It’s like feeling homesick the whole time, For a place that doesn’t exist. Beautiful.10

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Lantz Pierre 07 September 2017

I love the apparent sincerity and vulnerability here. The integrity of the feelings and unflinching self-awareness is unreproachable. There seems to be no intermediary between the mind in the act of contemplation and the hand taking diction. Very little artifice, nothing fraudulent, no accusations only self-admission. One rarely sees this kind of raw testimonial of the conscience.

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Tom Allport 07 September 2017

a lovely poem of expressing one's feelings towards another? ....................well penned.

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Liza Sudina 07 September 2017

Homesick the whole time for the place that doesn't exist - great lines, stunned me! That's what I feel all my life. Probably it is a true feeling that will find answer only in God. Maybe religion and Communion sacrament is what you need. People are not enough for you.10+!

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Kumarmani Mahakul 07 September 2017

I’ll always be able to forgive, and never forget you... . essence of the poem. Beautifully and touchingly expressed. Thanks and congratulations for being selected as the poem of the day.

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Bernard F. Asuncion 07 September 2017

Such a passionate poem picked twice... big congrats and a big 10++++++++

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Kumarmani Mahakul 07 September 2017

Through equal bliss, day light breaks. Although nothing helps still you glaze. You become able to forgiver but you never forget and this holds love. Very neatly and nicely penned poem is shared here....10..Congratulations! We are glad seeing your poem here as the poem of the day....10

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Brian Kilpatrick 07 September 2016

It rings true...well done

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Ben Paynter 07 September 2016

Hesitant, even in realization. This is why we write, to realize. Well done. Keep on, BP

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Ben Paynter 07 September 2016

Hesitant, even in realization. This is why we write, to realize. Well done, keep on. BP

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Venkata Reddy 07 September 2016

Very touchy one.Congrats

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Niamat Ali Murtazai 07 September 2016

Words seem to be coming out not from mouth but from the depth of heart. The poem is replete with shattered passion that is still strong and steadfast. It seem to be a try of winning a lost game.In fact, this loss is a victory.

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Anil Kumar Panda 07 September 2016

It is the greatness of you to forgive and still hold him in your heart. a touchy love poem that is very nice to read. Congrats.

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Bharati Nayak 07 September 2016

So frank, so beautiful and so touchy. Marvelous portrayal of a loving feeling that wants to be expressed, yet can't be. Ít's like feeling homesick the whole time For a place that does not exist.'- - - - - - -Congratulations for poem of the Day.

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