As day light breaks through equal bliss,
I look at my fingers and hands,
Expecting them to write anything, just anything,
Anything to do with how I feel for you.
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I'll always be able to forgive! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.
The best relationship is when someone(s) can be themselves and still be good friends..a ten
When something goes wrong between two hearts and still the memories remain strong. A very heartfelt poem. True love never dies. I speak to you every day, but somehow, We always end up playing the same old game. We talk of “how your day’s was and other events, But I always wonder if there’s more to say, Something which, I’m hiding from you....speaks how the heart yearns for love. Congrats.
Homesick for a place that doesn't exist.....this line stands out to me as bright as the sun, such true and gentle but at the same time strong love is expressed perfectly in this poem
whatever between us, I’ll always be able to forgive, and never forget you. Because without you around, It’s like feeling homesick the whole time Nicely penned poem. It speaks on its own. 10++
And finally, whatever between us, I’ll always be able to forgive, and never forget you. Because without you around, It’s like feeling homesick the whole time, For a place that doesn’t exist. Beautiful.10
I love the apparent sincerity and vulnerability here. The integrity of the feelings and unflinching self-awareness is unreproachable. There seems to be no intermediary between the mind in the act of contemplation and the hand taking diction. Very little artifice, nothing fraudulent, no accusations only self-admission. One rarely sees this kind of raw testimonial of the conscience.
a lovely poem of expressing one's feelings towards another? ....................well penned.
Homesick the whole time for the place that doesn't exist - great lines, stunned me! That's what I feel all my life. Probably it is a true feeling that will find answer only in God. Maybe religion and Communion sacrament is what you need. People are not enough for you.10+!
I’ll always be able to forgive, and never forget you... . essence of the poem. Beautifully and touchingly expressed. Thanks and congratulations for being selected as the poem of the day.
Such a passionate poem picked twice... big congrats and a big 10++++++++
Through equal bliss, day light breaks. Although nothing helps still you glaze. You become able to forgiver but you never forget and this holds love. Very neatly and nicely penned poem is shared here....10..Congratulations! We are glad seeing your poem here as the poem of the day....10
Hesitant, even in realization. This is why we write, to realize. Well done. Keep on, BP
Hesitant, even in realization. This is why we write, to realize. Well done, keep on. BP
Words seem to be coming out not from mouth but from the depth of heart. The poem is replete with shattered passion that is still strong and steadfast. It seem to be a try of winning a lost game.In fact, this loss is a victory.
It is the greatness of you to forgive and still hold him in your heart. a touchy love poem that is very nice to read. Congrats.
So frank, so beautiful and so touchy. Marvelous portrayal of a loving feeling that wants to be expressed, yet can't be. Ít's like feeling homesick the whole time For a place that does not exist.'- - - - - - -Congratulations for poem of the Day.
A genuine hearty relationship and a solid bondage between two souls are portrayed excellently. Congrats for being the member's PoD. X