Monday, August 10, 2009

To You Comments

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What can I say about you now?
I want to describe you but how?
From where should I make the start?
And which is first to be described as part?
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Passionate flower
COMMENTS
Neko Girl 19 March 2012

lovely just truly great :) love tin mouse

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John Knight 17 August 2009

Hi Passionate Flower - Another lovely poem in content and presentation You have a Poets Heart and a Poet Pen! I love the balance. Verse one presents the dilemma of every lover 'I want to describe you but how? '. It is more difficult for Ladies describing a Man than the other way round we can use flowery language and call our ladies Angels etc. However in verse two you throw convention to the winds and produce a perfect tribute that all sensitive and gentle men would love! Beautiful Roses, The sense of touch and kisses and then thanking God for an Angel - I love it. Verse three is the icing on the cake of verse two. The taste of a kiss - remembered - remembered - remembered. Eyes are so important - they are the windows of the soul - and a perfect lover. I have read hundreds of love poems on Poemhunter but this is by far the best - BEAUTIFUL.

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Catrina Heart 10 August 2009

Such a lovely and sweet written love poem..........Thanks!

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Graham Russell 10 August 2009

what can i say...it was heartfelt and covered much thank you

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Forest T. Jones 10 August 2009

lovely and passionate and charming all at the same time.

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