To Write; To Die; To Eat....... [thoughts While Lookiing At A Blue Sky; Personal; Pretty Short] Comments

sounds like a poem born out of boredom and pain so I think you should have started singing instead of feeling so restrained and you never know it could have brought a good downpour of refreshing rain? , , , nearly wonderfully written Sir Bri but the boot must go in, soz..

To write, to die, to eat.... this seems an odd priority! Make it 'To eat, to write, to die'! ! Let Death keep off its grip over Bri for some more time! Let him eat and write, for he can't keep these instincts at bay! ! I give this poem the boot! !