Thursday, May 7, 2009

To Women 12. 'Thank You, Lilith.' Comments

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Many years ago, when I was about 25, I heard a funny toast and remembered it. I told it many times adding changes, and after reading some poems about Lilith I decided to write this poem. I hope it isn’t too bad.


Let’s sing about the girl
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Konstantin Ananin
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Tsira Goge 17 May 2009

Konstantin. It is a new interesting a way in your poetry , but at us more better original and romantic toasts.... which would by pleasant to you, if you prefer by of poetic diplomacy, / with a smile / A purpose not always by justify at means. Why you turned with her so sternly! It would be much better without this prosaic ending... 10- Best wishes, Tsira

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