Tuesday, January 27, 2015

To Win Your Man's Heart Comments

Rating: 4.9

If you wish to win your man's heart somehow
Show interest rolling your admiring eyes,
As he raves over the pet subjects of his choice,
Occasionally responding to what he says.
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Valsa George
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Kanniappan Kanniappan 09 June 2016

Dear Prof Valsa, I read your poem after a long gap. You gave lots of suggestions 'To Win Your Man's Heart'; I read the very detailed comments of Bri Edwards and his reply poem 'To Win Your Woman's Heart ' Both are excellant.

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Kavya . 03 February 2015

hahahaha...loved the 4th para, the way to win a man's heart is thru his stomach..........

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Geetha Jayakumar 01 February 2015

A Very beautiful poem Vasla, especially for young couple, may be for all. Beautiful presentation. Loved it.

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Alesia Leach 30 January 2015

Insightful advice to all women. And as always, excellently penned.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 30 January 2015

Thus win him through magic of wooing makes this poem special and pleasing. Wonderful composition shared on really. Nicely drafted.

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Tirupathi Chandrupatla 30 January 2015

Beautiful advice for every would be wife. Others may know these by experience. Thank you.

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Paul Sebastian 30 January 2015

Another jewel! Communication in marriage well expounded. By another title, it would be Communication in Marriage or The Art of Love Making Great advice for anyone: before or after marriage. Score 10.

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Deepak Kumar Pattanayak 30 January 2015

Honest, decent, and just and pleasant to ears and heart, if adhered to may prove nectar for all young and old....... Valsa......beautifully crafted with nice rhyme and rhythm and wonderful words.......10

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Luo Zhihai 30 January 2015

I like the poetry. Good day!

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Madathil Rajendran Nair 28 January 2015

A wife's pleasing demeanour and care Can ease a man's life and his blues As filtering sunlight melts the mist That hides the meadow's lovely blooms Loved these lines in particular. Great practical advice to all sulking wives. Well done, Valsa-ji.

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Madathil Rajendran Nair 28 January 2015

A wife's pleasing demeanour and care Can ease a man's life and his blues As filtering sunlight melts the mist That hides the meadow's lovely blooms Loved these lines in particular. Great practical advice to all sulking wives. Well done, Valsa-ji.

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Bernard Snyder 28 January 2015

Another awesome poem Ms.George! Great points from top to bottom! Thanks for sharing such truthful words!

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Rajesh Thankappan 28 January 2015

Fantastic formulae for wooing a man even with a heart of stone. I am sure it will melt him like snow. I agree, though it might be in a wife's interest to appreciate and encourage her husband, the reverse also holds true.10/10 from me.

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Akhtar Jawad 27 January 2015

Thus win him through the magic of wooing Delight him with your soft whispers of crooning Never forget to take care of your grooming And sure, day by day you will see your love blooming An amazing poem, I am thinking to translate it in Urdu and send to my wife.................10

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Gajanan Mishra 27 January 2015

love blooming, very beautiful, I think everyone should learn this art of love, thanks,

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