If you wish to win your man's heart somehow
Show interest rolling your admiring eyes,
As he raves over the pet subjects of his choice,
Occasionally responding to what he says.
Simulate keenness, though you don't have it
When he prates over his job and its challenges
Pep up his confidence through words of concern
Make him feel, you are there to share his tensions
A wife's pleasing demeanour and care
Can ease a man's life and his blues
As filtering sunlight melts the mist
That hides the meadow's lovely blooms
Know his favourite food and the cuisine he loves
Prepare them oftener than he can expect
The easiest way to get into a man's heart
Is through gratifying and titillating his palate
Though he may show disinterest in flattery
Compliment him over the ‘great things' he has done
You'll see his former stance suddenly changed
Through praise, sure, his heart you have won
In the privacy of your closet on cold, starlit nights
Lie closer to him, even feigning false passion
As a flower bares its perfumed heart to the bee
Give yourself completely to him sans restriction
Thus win him through the magic of wooing
Delight him with your soft whispers of crooning
Never forget to take care of your grooming
And sure, day by day you will see your love blooming
love blooming, very beautiful, I think everyone should learn this art of love, thanks,
Beautiful advice for every would be wife. Others may know these by experience. Thank you.
Another jewel! Communication in marriage well expounded. By another title, it would be Communication in Marriage or The Art of Love Making Great advice for anyone: before or after marriage. Score 10.
Honest, decent, and just and pleasant to ears and heart, if adhered to may prove nectar for all young and old....... Valsa......beautifully crafted with nice rhyme and rhythm and wonderful words.......10
Dear Prof Valsa, I read your poem after a long gap. You gave lots of suggestions 'To Win Your Man's Heart'; I read the very detailed comments of Bri Edwards and his reply poem 'To Win Your Woman's Heart ' Both are excellant.
hahahaha...loved the 4th para, the way to win a man's heart is thru his stomach..........
A Very beautiful poem Vasla, especially for young couple, may be for all. Beautiful presentation. Loved it.
Insightful advice to all women. And as always, excellently penned.
Thus win him through magic of wooing makes this poem special and pleasing. Wonderful composition shared on really. Nicely drafted.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Thus win him through the magic of wooing Delight him with your soft whispers of crooning Never forget to take care of your grooming And sure, day by day you will see your love blooming An amazing poem, I am thinking to translate it in Urdu and send to my wife.................10