Careless whispers, heartless talk
Where are you going with this?
“Daddy was not a man for me, mother was everything”
Ignorance breeds ugly talk
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And realize that we weren’t born bad, neither were you or your mother.... And realize that we weren’t born bad, neither were you or your mother.... And realize that we weren’t born bad, neither were you or your mother.... Salute for weaving with word such a net to communicate the widom in poetry. It would be better if the child-generation could have everybody the scope of reading this one. Regards, pranab 10+++(if server carries)
It can be so hard for children from broken relationships to understand why there can be bitterness. To me your confusion about your dad comes over, you love/loved him whatever anyone else said about him. You know he had faults but know everyone else does too. Your poem made me think about my situation with my children, especially my son. Thank you Nessy x
I think you have chosen a universal theme for the poem. Of late we find such chaos in every third family. The growing materialism is cavitizing the very roots of the institution of family. You have depicted the whole scenario very effectively. Since the poem is autographical in nature, as it appears, the sentiments are very deep. Very well written.10 Thanks for sharing.....
It's very sensitive social poem, David “Daddy was a slacker, mother was everything” ....................................................................................... I think that it's horror when the son or a daughter (this does not matter) so speaks about daddy.... But, I understand you well, though I had good childhood, Sincerely, Tsira
beautiful thought expressed using powerful and piercing words..............oh! poetic bud u'll surely turn into a perfect flower......
The complexity of life is dealt so poetically! Well done, my friend. I always like your tone and narration skills. Thanks for sharing it. Marks 10
A diamond in the rough, bad fathers don't worry about being good fathers. A very emotional poem, thank you for sharing.