Tuesday, July 15, 2008

To Whom It May Concern.. Comments

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a darkness lit
an echo in my silence..
he became the peaceful dream, lapping at my un and conscious mind
-note though, through no fault of his own..
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adele le keur
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Alfredo Jacques 23 August 2008

This is a great poem thanks for sharing, I really liked the line an echo in my silence. great write

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Kyle Shield Laster 15 July 2008

a very fine poem. i love your free form. amazing!

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adele le keur

adele le keur

cape town, south africa
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