Wednesday, February 21, 2007

To Whom It May Concern Comments

Rating: 2.8

Ode to you my dearest friend, who stood with me when times were black
I never wanted to offend, but now I've gone and can't come back.
Praise to you my confidant, I needed you to understand.
Into the grave I now descend, my life erased by my own hand.
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Davidia Kartina 02 June 2007

I REALLY LOVED 'this mortal coil' IT WOULD BE A GOOD NAME FOR...., , .... A HAMBURGER STAND lol anywa.....y.... how did you add amy i want to add her i love her. and i know she loves me. forever. we love. *************please read and review my poems please **********************

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Geoff Warden 21 February 2007

Truly enjoyed this read, it has a hidden feeling of direct suttlety

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