Wednesday, January 13, 2021

To Whom Do I Owe? Comments

Rating: 4.8

To plan is such a rough guideline
Time and possibility will batter the flow
I betroth to the uncertain signs
That will steer me onto the crow
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April DOWN
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David Wood 08 February 2021

There is the Sylvia Plath style in the lovely poem. Very enjoyable read, a good 5* more please!

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Luz Hanaii 04 February 2021

Very unique and interesting, loved it!

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Unnikrishnan E S 17 January 2021

"A colourless spectrum/But entering the fullness of energy " what a profound wordplay ❤️

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Unnikrishnan E S 17 January 2021

Please do write more and share.5 stars for this gem

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Unnikrishnan E S 17 January 2021

Wow! Loved this great poem. Real poetry. " Inquisitively and naively, I stare Into the abyssal deepness of space The flickers calling under my skin so rare To return I know I will lose this face". Your have immense innate poetic talents.

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April DOWN 21 January 2021

Thank you so much for your complimentary comments, I am honored for you to read and enjoy my poetry

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Clinton Siegle 16 January 2021

The poem was well thought out. Hey follow me and I will follow you to read more of your work.

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