Sunday, April 6, 2008
To What I Once Was Comments
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When you shift your life's priorities,
People shift their views
They talked about my success
Then about my treatment news.
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7/24/2025 7:21:36 PM # 1.0.0
Very nice thoughts, Josh. Use poems to be your release if you think you may relapse. Perhaps an essy on your troubles/struggles might aid others. Stylistically, your sentences are a little too busy. Streamline your lines by eliminating some unneccesary words. Make your lines sing! Heaven is in the composing, but the editing is what makes the poem. My best and keep writing! John L. :)