Friday, October 25, 2013

To What End Comments

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'In the beginning God created the heavens and the earth.'

Perfection with beauty a world he did create for humanity to appreciate; a place of no vexation of soul that was his mold.
But then that which was perfect went another direction because of indiscretion there exists aggression from the watchers that calls for insurrection of God's perfect creation.
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Terrance Tracy
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S.zaynab Kamoonpuri 26 October 2013

A thoughprovokin great poem on man's rapacity! True. Pls review my latest poem too.

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Khairul Ahsan 25 October 2013

'we have lost that inner voice that will get us through the gate; can you count the cost? , ' You have left the reader with a point to ponder. 'Yet there is hope and peace that all will agree to the one who brings us victory over death the final enemy this is predestined to be.' This needs a bit of elaboration, perhaps.

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Terrance Tracy

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