Tuesday, August 5, 2008

To Us - Dot Com. Comments

Rating: 5.0

Amazingly woven
These webs of togetherness
Winging the oceons
Laden with line.
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Fay Slimm
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Ashraful Musaddeq 15 September 2008

A nice poem with the aid of infotech, content is new. I love it and added 10.

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Tango 31 August 2008

So wonderfully put, my how the world has shrunk, with technology. With the webs of togetherness, friendships blossom, and grow. An excellent poem. Tango.

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Tom Balch 16 August 2008

Very nicely done Fay, 'Winging the Oceans' love it. regards Tom

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Fay Slimm

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