Wednesday, July 9, 2008

To Understand Me Comments

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Right now I’m too weak
To understand me
Or to listen to you speak.
I’m too much of a man to cry,
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Robert Trew
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Sarah Atieno 10 July 2008

This is good piece of work. It explains a lot about people and the message comes out clearly in the 2nd stanza when one reads the lines in a somehow alternating manner! What a creative way of writing. I'm totally impressed!

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