Wednesday, September 30, 2015

To Trilby Comments

Rating: 5.0

The sky is a greater musician than I:
the rains plays pizzicato on the rooftops
with no sign of fatigue;
clouds hit every note I miss
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Paul Kesler
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Terry Dawson 04 October 2015

I strongly suspect that this poem obtains the highest standard of excellence, but as something of a novice in poetry I hesitate to be too emphatic in my opinions. I can't wait to see what this poet has written!

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Paul Kesler 05 October 2015

Terry, thanks for your comment. As for the quality of my work, I let others decide that - authors are usually the poorest judges of their own writing.

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Terry Dawson 04 October 2015

I strongly suspect that this poem obtains the highest standard of excellence, but a something of a novice in poetry I hesitate to be too emphatic in my opinions. I can't wait to see what this poet has written!

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