To what distant places do our mouths go
each time they lock together in a kiss?
to what wild rivers do our joined lips flow
like fish freed from the jar to the abyss
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The can be a great deal of meaning in just one kiss and your poem has great meaning, as delicious as a lingering kiss. Best poem I've read for some time on PH. It's a 10 and I shall put it in my list of favourite poems. Truly beautiful.
Amazing poem.A 10 of course