I am a kite
I can go everywhere site by site
My work is to fly
To touch the sky
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You are touching the sky! Beautiful poetry. Please keep writing. Looking forward to more. Best wishes!
Lovely work. Kite brings a sense of nostalgia. Wonderful topic indeed.
I liked this poem. You have a really good way of communicating your thoughts. With much appreciation.
OK, but I think that rhymed poetry should have lines of the same length, the repeats tend to tire.
your work is to fly...keep flying...May you never get cut off...May the joys of life always keep you on a big high...always
Indeed samra we share something here.............which cant be seen by anyone..... beoz we r singing in unison :)
wow verl lovely poems ahen we were kids we were do some kite running and we had so much fun in that time love the poem regards
A very nice poem really. It's a pity you don't write anything about yourself: age, country, native tongue...
A very nice poem really. It's a pity that you don't write anything about yourself: age, ??untry, native tongue...
I'm a kite in the sky, soaring above, in glee, throu' the hands of wind, soon I'll be losing my mind..... ********************** I like your poem....top marks! ! !
very nicely written.. i loved reading it.