Sunday, January 15, 2012

To Touch The Sky Comments

Rating: 3.5

I am a kite
I can go everywhere site by site
My work is to fly
To touch the sky
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Samra Haq
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Nabeela Haq 26 October 2020

very nicely written.. i loved reading it.

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Sumaiya Malik 19 October 2019

You are touching the sky! Beautiful poetry. Please keep writing. Looking forward to more. Best wishes!

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Syed Md.zainul Abedin 03 July 2016

Lovely work. Kite brings a sense of nostalgia. Wonderful topic indeed.

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Laiakini Waqanisau 04 March 2014

I liked this poem. You have a really good way of communicating your thoughts. With much appreciation.

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Kanniappan Kanniappan 04 March 2014

Simple and nice. I like it very much!

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Leslie Philibert 04 March 2014

OK, but I think that rhymed poetry should have lines of the same length, the repeats tend to tire.

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Jasbir Chatterjee 04 March 2013

your work is to fly...keep flying...May you never get cut off...May the joys of life always keep you on a big high...always

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Gajanan Mishra 04 March 2013

To touch the sky. I like it. thanks.

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Sharad Juneja 08 April 2012

Indeed samra we share something here.............which cant be seen by anyone..... beoz we r singing in unison :)

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Passionate Flower 10 March 2012

wow verl lovely poems ahen we were kids we were do some kite running and we had so much fun in that time love the poem regards

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Natalia Sozh 04 March 2012

A very nice poem really. It's a pity you don't write anything about yourself: age, country, native tongue...

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Natalia Sozh 04 March 2012

A very nice poem really. It's a pity that you don't write anything about yourself: age, ??untry, native tongue...

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Vipins Puthooran 18 January 2012

I'm a kite in the sky, soaring above, in glee, throu' the hands of wind, soon I'll be losing my mind..... ********************** I like your poem....top marks! ! !

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Samra Haq

Samra Haq

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