To Time Comments

What a great poem... you can read my poem after love lost it's really nice thanks

for living with you I've taken birth O' Time! but you're not flower, not stalks, not petals, not fragrance you're not beautiful lips; not eyes; not nose; not thin; not pleasing body of beauty often you come with happiness and go by giving sorrow, often you come with sorrow and go by giving happiness O' Time please tell me how can I live with your well and woe together? ............. nice writing

I request you for Keep mine this simple prayer, Mine strong witness you are Request I have no more......this is the nice plea to time. Beautifully penned.

A simple prayer associated with life motivates life's essence. With touching note time inspires many. An Amazing poem is brilliantly penned.10

Wonderful poem, in touching theme

Every stanza is great, outstanding