To This World Of Dying Humanity Comments

WOW! The revelation..with such powerful emotions! The expression..such interpretation..very exquisite! Superb! One of the best!

It is an outpouring of true feelings and underling the EGO as the cause for all strife inthis world.......is very nice to read....deserves more than 10

this one is a great one............well done............! ! 10

This is a materpiece of great thoughts and expressions. Terrific piece Bhayya. I can write a thousand pages praising this great piece. Heart warming poem. I hope a day comes when we all like like one family in the lap of Mother Earth. Wow! What a piece bhayya!

there is depth in your poetry...good lingo and sweet fluent flow...good message you bring in here...10

horrifying yet, thruthful vision. thx for a glimpse of hope though! the more i read your poetry, the more it becomes familiar. sharp words, no sugarcoating! i really like it.

ya ofcourse! this is our truth. THANKS 4 this great wonderful poem.10+++++

Spoken words of a real Human. Welcome to my world. Love the words you breathe....Give us some more to remind us of all we all are! . Excellent! give you 10!

Its a selfmade dying.........we got us to blame! Like an AIDS patient, our immunities decaying and lamenting to die.......a loser! Great piece from you bro! ! ! Well done!

Kamran, 'For the sake of the other soul; You can salvage, The Spirit Forfeited; And you can retrieve, The Paradise Lost; On this planet of living misery, And in this world of dying humanity' I am spellbound--you have the power to express so beautifully--you are indeed great. Surely that 'That Paradise Lost' you will be able to.make 'Paradise Regained'. You have that power in you by way of knowledge and intuition. You seemed to be touched by that ray of God. You are erudite. Enlightenment is in you. Arise awake You THE SUN HAS RISEN.. I loved this poem goes to my fav list A+ and 10+ regards anjali

The poem is like Sermon on the Mount.

a very nice and thought provoking poem. i am surprised to see tht as this tender age you are so mature in your thinking and writing. well done keep it up.

I love how you expressed this poem so well.. I love the questions you have asked in this poem also.. Great piece

Very different! You have talent!

what a coincidence before reading your poem i was listening to Kalam of Bulle Shah sung by Abida Parveen....To be very honest with you Shah Sahib....its a marvellous and inspiring write with lots of messages and yes you are absolutely right about the thoughts of the people now a days, but what to do things are in not our hands any more or may be they are, but we are avoiding it deleberately...its a quite long write but truely i loved it 10+++ for this couragous write...thanks for shring rgds asif

i guess u r trully love ur life, fam n peace...i love ur truth here eventhought u didnt judge ur self as poet, bt u r! ..wonderful, syed..