To The Woman I Adore Comments

Thanks for sharing your thoughts, view and concept with the rest of us. You have expressed well the love one has for another, even if it is prohibited, for that is the portrayal you have shared with your words. The imagery that comes through this shows one who loves another the same, but wonders if it will ever be truly reciprocated with the same passion as held by the one whose desires overtake them. Recognition rises of sin, but it does not matter for the love held overrides everything. I can actually comprehend and grasp this well, for there is much similarity in this with a situation some years ago that rose, and the turmoil that ensued because of it. Friendship strengthened, intimacy not. Then images rise of a love pure that can blossom and grow as long as it is reciprocated with the same heart, the way it should be. Hope you don't mind, but found a couple of tweaks needed: One query what is nowt? 8th line you have, 'If I held you while you wept would you still return your throne' suggest, '...still return to your throne' 17th line you have, 'If I caould have one night alone with you my blue - eyed angel' spelling error, could last line you have, 'Another time just you and I but this no more a dream? ? ' suggest, '....but this is no more than a dream or '....but is this no more than a dream? Many blesssings to you