Some fragments of her heart
That was shattered long ago
Swam to the winter burrow
With broken angelic wings
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Wonderfully written poem.. The imagery and the words are beautiful.. Thanks.
Thoughts done in ways that subtly presents the dreams the cares and anxieties that every heart carries within.....Winnie
Expressive outpouring of feeling! I especially liked this: 'Some swirled mutely on brooks Of veracity’s enchanting tale' Pretty wording. Enjoyable read!
very nice literary piece. Ma'am Catrina, you write very good!
You draw the reader into your enchanted world. Beautiful imagery.... Warm wishes, Sandra
I loved your wording awesome...... Keep them coming I wonder when this lady will write a book my goodnesss..... You got amazing talent keep shining bright as the sun Miss Heart...
Choice of diction, imagery and the feelings behind, all are superb. A heart touching poem.