Tuesday, August 18, 2009

To The Victor, Goes The Spoils. Comments

Rating: 5.0

You may not miss me
when I'm gone,
And I'll not hold my breath;
I must leave this forlorn place,
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david lessard
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Shannon Sheeley 21 August 2009

Wow, awesome poem...love, love, LOVE the last two lines - effectively stinging! I would say the message comes across - glad this wasn't written for me... ; -)

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Carol Gall 19 August 2009

reallly great write emotional 10

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david lessard

gardner, massachusetts
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