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WOW a beautifully written poem with so much truth i remember my mother saying six foot of ground will hold everyone be they pauper or king so true

Thus ere ye consider founding, building thy imposing edifice a homeless vagrant if ye shelter in thine care Knowing our lives art' but on a mere precipice while the joy of giving doth give a joy beyond compare! This is an amazing write with such a lofty message! ! Oh, I love this poem and agree with each single detail, you have given! This deserves in every right a full 10 I also invite you to read my poem.. Dust unto Dust! The thoughts mentioned by you are thoughts I always ponder over! !

A fantastic poem, great words.

yes, all stranded on the surface of grave, money, title and everything. death is a transit for next life. the judgement... love the wordplay-inspiringly beautiful.

Yes great words indeed. Thank you

Very nice write. I really enjoyed it.

yes its the reality of life in simple way, great way of expressing it, well done

That is such a really a good writing. I simply love it alot!

yes dear. it is greater than greater. very mature and strong message. considering our life styles and these realities of 'haq', i can smile and weep at once by heart. Allah bless u.

this's the first poem of yours that i read.for coments sake Kevin Patrick expressed mores cogently.but i add that your have the talent for poetry, the competence i might say.i hope u write modern poetry, for how different it'd be.please notify me about a specific free verse you cherish, because i won't be quick of going through all your poetry.

A great tribute to the classical style of verse writing, it feels like this is a lost work of the 19tth century and yet still modern and contemporary to come from now, Its a pretty dark subject matter, no matter how mighty our towers how fully our bellies or how full your pockets nature will send out her tax collector of life and claim us for the grave, the words of the past are forever, in the souls of now.