Thursday, November 28, 2013

To The Tune Of 'Dust Thou Art' N To Dust Returnest' Comments

Rating: 5.0

O' man thou erecteth palaces, castles and courts
while on death a mere grave sufficeth thee
How magnificent and formidable thou maketh thy forts
in thy wish to make both future and history.
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s.zaynab kamoonpury
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Noreen Carden 09 December 2013

WOW a beautifully written poem with so much truth i remember my mother saying six foot of ground will hold everyone be they pauper or king so true

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Valsa George 08 December 2013

Thus ere ye consider founding, building thy imposing edifice a homeless vagrant if ye shelter in thine care Knowing our lives art' but on a mere precipice while the joy of giving doth give a joy beyond compare! This is an amazing write with such a lofty message! ! Oh, I love this poem and agree with each single detail, you have given! This deserves in every right a full 10 I also invite you to read my poem.. Dust unto Dust! The thoughts mentioned by you are thoughts I always ponder over! !

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Dave Walker 06 December 2013

A fantastic poem, great words.

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Ibnu Din Assingkiri 05 December 2013

yes, all stranded on the surface of grave, money, title and everything. death is a transit for next life. the judgement... love the wordplay-inspiringly beautiful.

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Lyn Paul 04 December 2013

Yes great words indeed. Thank you

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R.benjamin Abate 01 December 2013

Very nice write. I really enjoyed it.

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Mohammed Albalushi 01 December 2013

yes its the reality of life in simple way, great way of expressing it, well done

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Hana Kanzaki 30 November 2013

That is such a really a good writing. I simply love it alot!

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Muhammad Ali 28 November 2013

yes dear. it is greater than greater. very mature and strong message. considering our life styles and these realities of 'haq', i can smile and weep at once by heart. Allah bless u.

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Idris Elasha 28 November 2013

this's the first poem of yours that i read.for coments sake Kevin Patrick expressed mores cogently.but i add that your have the talent for poetry, the competence i might say.i hope u write modern poetry, for how different it'd be.please notify me about a specific free verse you cherish, because i won't be quick of going through all your poetry.

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Kevin Patrick 28 November 2013

A great tribute to the classical style of verse writing, it feels like this is a lost work of the 19tth century and yet still modern and contemporary to come from now, Its a pretty dark subject matter, no matter how mighty our towers how fully our bellies or how full your pockets nature will send out her tax collector of life and claim us for the grave, the words of the past are forever, in the souls of now.

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