To The Students Comments

A really beautifully written quick read.

Brilliant and memorable work!

Very short and sweet, well done

Simple and beautiful lines, thank you poet.

This is a profound poem. And true! As a teacher myself, I never thought of it the way you do. thanks for opening m mind. Joan Woodbrdge

Short, precise and deep... nicely penned

I ain't surprised you have many votes and comments. It underscores the metaphoric colouration of this poem. Thought provoking. You should not allow your ink go dry

Great poem and nice style of writing.

Such Brilliant writing just incredible! You can never lash out me............. beautiful

Beautiful thought, compressed idea. interesting like a riddle. Thank you Jazib Kamalvi

a poem concise and beautiful... thanks poet Jazib

I am ocean you are flood, You can never lash out me minus the grammar which in HIndi and Urdu can go the dams the words you chose are incomparable young man

very nice pome.thank you

Very articulate way of telling your students i will be in your life. you can never get rid of me.... my positive influences will remain in you.. a great poem. tony

I am a retired teacher, so I loved this. Well Done.

nice lines, compact, condensed and concise..I am present in your blood, / You will never wash out me..wonderful write

Great poem Jazib..we are in the vast ocean of knowledge, just have to grasp..+++10

A very valuable short poem that depicts the great heart of a teacher who is the ocean of wisdom and a flood (the student) is only its disciple......I am ocean you are flood/You can never lash out me..thank you for sharing..10

Revisiting this poem values more. Teachers educate students from ocean of knowledge.10

Haha. Very true. Except for the footnote, one would be left to wonder what exactly is addressed. Terse and salient.