Monday, March 12, 2012

"To The Students&Quot; Comments

Rating: 4.5

I see the young, I see the old,
I see their every face.
I see the world in sands of time,
With oceans in the race.
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Osama Waqar
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Kim Barney 01 December 2015

Very well done. Nice rhyme scheme.

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The Reader 03 August 2012

Osama! i can see your confidence reflecting through this composition...Ease, Simplicity of expression, & Flow are the marked features of your style here! And when you learn to work and trust, And rise above the odds; To strive n' thrive with zeal and zest. To fight against the frauds. With faith in God, you'll get the chance, To blow the sands of time; And offer me, Osama! We have Made your every rhyme. beautiful lines....

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Umul Baneen Brohi 13 March 2012

And rise above the odds...Gives me hope :)

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Dave Walker 12 March 2012

A great poem, like it. A great write. May i invite you to read my new poem called, The Holy man.

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Osama Waqar

Osama Waqar

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