Friday, February 5, 2016

To The Spouse Of My Ex-Spouse Comments

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To the Spouse of my Ex-Spouse,
I hope you find happiness in my old house.
I hope you enjoy the chaos that was once my life.
I hope you find peace amid the every day strife.
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Elena Plotkin
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Bri Edwards 22 January 2017

the ending gave me a LARGE laugh. Thanks! ! a 'GREAT' poem here from you. so the marriage was not completely all for naught, i.e. the marriage managed to inspire you to write this wonderful poem, even if its other impact was all or most often NEGATIVE in your life! of course, this may not be about you! my three divorces were positive influences on my life, and the marriages were not totally 'bombs'. i 'love' the rhyming. i like the repetitive phrase: I hope you/your. i love the in short and dead weight. i'd 'LOVE' to put into a showcase. may i, please? ? it goes to MyPoemList. bri aka Brian ;) i don't suppose all readers will find this so entertaining. : (

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