TO THE SLEEPLESS BELLS
(TO THE POET CHUMMED UP
WITH A VERSEZ...)
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Ageless as all true poetry must be. Your last lines are simply superb.10 for your eloquence. Love, Sandra
How did i misss this pen gem? ! I like this piece a lot, T...Your penchant for inventive language that captures the Readers fancy, is darting...as is this smmooth, sweeping poem that flows like water past a river-break...Bravo, young lady! FjR
This was a very creative piece that was much clearer than the last. Therefore, the meaning was transmitted. The truly fine element which elevates the score is the composition. It was excellant. GW62
The sleepless bells Rang in the chapel… And I prayed to the Queen of Angels --------- It echoed into the clouds' lever - the end of hyberbole - Nothing less than a blur hope - the Queen must be blind - sincere -
This is a very complacted write, and crafted very well, No one has givin it a score, It was no problem for me to give it a ten, Excellent penning, Tsira
Oh Tsira, I am truly honoured, and held somewhat speechless. This is eloquent, and you surely lifted my spirits on a day they really needed it. I will have to return to say more than this later. Thank you ever so much. All my hopes, Gregory
Something about your writing, Tsira, always leaves me feeling refreshed.... as if 'And by the verse was healed' is true of yours for me.. I should find more time to come to your healing pages.. Thanks for this lovely piece.. jim xxx