Oh gently passing night
Can't you lull me to sleep?
How long can I keep
Counting the sheep?
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How long can I keep Counting the sheep? A very impressive poem, abut falling asleep, so brillantly worded, dear Poetess! 5 Stars full
Great to learn from the lesson that life has taught us in specific time. A wonderful poem! !
Another great poem with a simple and straight appeal, and sleep is something that puts you in touch with your deep
You can bless me with a dream Of a gently flowing stream In a lush green valley Where a thousand flowers sway..............What a beauty of words and lines!
I have often begged those sheep to go away and let me sleep. Another beautiful poem that touches the reader's heart. Be blessed. 10
The poetic urge to the sublime night to lull the uncanny self to sleep is fabulously sketched! The subtlety of expression is adorable…As a reader, I love to quote: You can bless me with a dream/of a gently flowing stream/in a lush green valley/where a thousand flowers sway…10
Gathering self strength through self assessment with fragrance of thousand of flowers matter a lot. At night subtle vibrations are well caught during rest in silence. Brilliant perceptional poem is excellently penned...10
A lovely poem and nicely presented. I could see myself counting sheeps when sleep is so elusive.
Exquisitely written.U will definitely get your good sleep every day Madam.