Friday, August 14, 2009

To The Silent Heart Of A Stone Comments

Rating: 4.0

I told the story to the stone
to get some coldness to deaden my soul

'YESTERDAY I saw a number of crows wish that
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Dibakar Sarkar
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Meggie Gultiano 22 August 2009

a well crafted piece.Nice write

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Preeti Chauhan 17 August 2009

I just the way you concluded this poem, thanks for sharing.

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Mohammed Albalushi 17 August 2009

nice poem dear Dibakar and i like the title alot, wish you all the best

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Christina Phan 17 August 2009

Fanastic job 10+ Great theme and title I enjoy, its something new and different

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Fay Slimm 17 August 2009

Wistful verse and told wih a flow - - could almost be sung and would still retain it; s message...... well done...... Fay

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Seema Aarella 17 August 2009

Nice theme....well expressed, check out for some corrections! last lines are good!

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Nikunj Sharma 17 August 2009

nice imagery and linkage......different poem...........just check out punctuations and spelling of POLE. nice work

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