Wednesday, March 9, 2016

To The Queen Of Tragic Love….. Comments

Rating: 4.5

She loved him
With all the passion
she was bestowed with,
surrendered her wishes
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M. Asim Nehal
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Shreya Hacks 02 February 2022

To my fav list.

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Shreya Hacks 02 February 2022

Outstanding poem, no words can describe the beauty with which you created this poem. AWESOME.

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Mihaela Pirjol 24 March 2016

Wow! ! ! .....this is really a powerful writing; and what makes it more spectacular, it is the fact that in a way can easily identify with the protagonist of your poem...Lovely poem!

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Darren Jkoeryo 18 March 2016

Super poem Man.....10

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Edward Kofi Louis 14 March 2016

Within her two eyes of love. Great work!

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Aarzoo Mehek 10 March 2016

Oh My! this is one of your best poem. Seldom does a man understand the depth of a woman's heart... You have expressed it so beautifully on behalf of so many broken souls. Very impressive, inspiring and touchy to the core. I dedicate these four lines from an old nazm of mine. Aurat seep main jaise moti hai Band rehti apne ehsaas main Khud apne hi zaat main Mehfooz apni tanhaai main Duniya ke khauf se bekhabar Aas-Paas ke mahoul se be-asar... And the journey of life continues... :)

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Liza Sudina 10 March 2016

Not to look in front - but to look up high - may be to change the focus? then the false passion that seemed true - will die And you''ll feel life like a bonus! may be this could be the way out for her from this sad concentration on him?

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Nosheen Irfan 09 March 2016

A beautiful poem on love and betrayal. You are at your best when you touch upon the theme of love. The expression throughout the poem is amazing.10 of course.

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M Asim Nehal 10 March 2016

Thank u so much, Nosheen, I am not a romantic person by nature and I seldom express my true feelings to those I love and those who love me, maybe some day when they read my work they will realise the truth.

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Kelly Kurt 09 March 2016

A very heartfelt poem. Such things are written well by few and you are among that number

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M Asim Nehal 10 March 2016

Thank u so much, Kelly, I am humbled by your appreciation, I just write what I feel for myself and others.

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