She loved him
With all the passion
she was bestowed with,
surrendered her wishes
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Outstanding poem, no words can describe the beauty with which you created this poem. AWESOME.
Wow! ! ! .....this is really a powerful writing; and what makes it more spectacular, it is the fact that in a way can easily identify with the protagonist of your poem...Lovely poem!
Oh My! this is one of your best poem. Seldom does a man understand the depth of a woman's heart... You have expressed it so beautifully on behalf of so many broken souls. Very impressive, inspiring and touchy to the core. I dedicate these four lines from an old nazm of mine. Aurat seep main jaise moti hai Band rehti apne ehsaas main Khud apne hi zaat main Mehfooz apni tanhaai main Duniya ke khauf se bekhabar Aas-Paas ke mahoul se be-asar... And the journey of life continues... :)
Not to look in front - but to look up high - may be to change the focus? then the false passion that seemed true - will die And you''ll feel life like a bonus! may be this could be the way out for her from this sad concentration on him?
A beautiful poem on love and betrayal. You are at your best when you touch upon the theme of love. The expression throughout the poem is amazing.10 of course.
Thank u so much, Nosheen, I am not a romantic person by nature and I seldom express my true feelings to those I love and those who love me, maybe some day when they read my work they will realise the truth.
A very heartfelt poem. Such things are written well by few and you are among that number
Thank u so much, Kelly, I am humbled by your appreciation, I just write what I feel for myself and others.
To my fav list.