To The People Where Freedom Exists, I Write Comments

The take of line ‘To the people where freedom exists, I write’ .is the touch down line of this excellent poetry…congrats. Obed … thanks sharing… Ms. Nivedita UK 10/10 PS Freedom a.k.a is liberty clamps Narcissism…opens floodgate of Altruism n

Though young you are, all your poems speak like those coming from a 80 years old well experienced lady. Such matured thoughts you are having in this very young age of yours. May God bless you with a long, healthy and prosperous life. Go on be writing like this and one day, you will reach the height of fame and will surely become one of the top most poetesses in the world of poetry.

There is power in the lines of this poem. It's really good.It's a blueprint for peaceful coexistance and a call to action to those who could do something to help the downtrodden. It flows along with a rap like riming pattern which is very effective as is the language you employ.Avoid the poem running into prose in the last few verses with the urgency of expression. Like a great painting it aims to be one perfect piece. Patience will keep your thoughts from overflowing. The content of the poem is excellent. Your vision of things as they should be is statesmanlike. Congrats on a great piece of work.

nice write, i wouldn't have been able to pull off the whole ryhming dealy deal like you did. i don't have the patience. the thing that you write about, is beautiful but i don't think that us, the weak and greedy human race can accomplish something like this. some will try and others will follow behind and destroy that. keep it up!

when i wrote the poem 'the world', you were just two years old. now time flies fast...good poem..good rhyming..

great job! This one inspires me to keep writing and to get out there and make the world a better place.

great.! that was such a nice poem for the people to read.! nice thing and that what the poem actually about to meke the people known were all but true ☺ and that what we must do ☺ nice one.! keep it up.! ☺

Full of enthusiasm and well presentedd Obed....10 from Fay...

We all have our struggles. Try 'Confrortation'.