This is for the nice girls that are overlooked,
Who become friends and nothing more.
Who spend hours trying to fix their personality,
Their looks, and their actions because obviously it must be that they are doing something wrong.
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Crystal, this is a very powerful poem, and I cannot tell you how much I appreciate it. That last verse should give every young LADY (notice I call them ladies, not girls) hope that she can finally grow up out of this childish behavior from guys...how powerful that last verse should show them to truly. truly be, for being strong enough to hold out for the PRIZE that is worth it all-their own self-respect! Wonderfully written, good going, keep it up.
Crystal, I love this. I love that you are trying to empower these girls. I hope you realize there is a difference between being a ''nice'' girl and a ''pushover''. I hope you see that guys might be looking for an easy girl right now (way too young for that anyways!) but when they start looking around for a girl to get serious with...it sure won't one of those girls that they found so easy before. It really is worth waiting for. Trust me. You are worth waiting for. Once you find yourself, love will find you. Take care Crystal. Love, Mary
wow - that was an awesome poem and so totally true.. i love it <33 love, amanda <3