To The Mountain Breeze Comments

This poem was a soothing breeze which I am delighted to embrace.

Here in my senility I lie Unsung, drained of life Please do come So we can sing A carol or a bhajan To whatever that makes things click On this barren land of dreams Verily, the mountain breeze like the sea breeze carries a message and provision for mankind

...sweep our lonely homes we, the coughing ones on sinking easy chairs... a lovely thought

Here in my senility I lie Unsung, drained of life Please do come So we can sing A carol or a bhajan To whatever that makes things click On this barren land of dreams..................... This is a lovely poem on the soothing effect of a mountain breeze with many striking images! But do you you have to bemoan over senility, when you are not yet senile, but quite agile! A 10

Nice lines inviting the breeze to shower its power of healing on the ailing ones.A good write.Another great poem Thank you

'Here in my senility I lie Unsung, drained of life Please do come So we can sing A carol or a bhajan To whatever that makes things click On this barren land of dreams' Some really vivid imagery and a wonderful poem that captures emotions and nature - natural emotions - emotional Nature - in perfection.. Thank you for sharing...

Wow! A brilliantly written poem. The wording captured my imagination and held me rapt. Thanks, Madathil