Monday, May 1, 2006

To The Memory Of Love Comments

Rating: 4.9

Petals torn from faded roses,
Memories stored in jars.
Photographs with different poses,
To worship from afar.
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Dee Daffodil
COMMENTS
Melissa Patty 09 January 2017

Beautifully written with such a clear and touching message Melissa x

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ngaio beck 12 September 2008

This one is very true.The memories remain sweeter, stronger when you lose your love when you are both young and very much in love.

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Chris Mendros 27 July 2007

Well crafted and very evocative. A tidy summing-up of all the pains that only love can bring. Nice work.

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J M Basey 25 November 2006

Good poem Dee, liked it very much. Much love, Jay x x

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Davency Leroy 06 August 2006

This is one of the best/romantic poem I've ever read on this website! And that my friend, is the TRUTH!

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Brian Dorn 11 June 2006

Dee, interesting line... love does come and go with very little effort. GREAT poem! Brian

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Valsa Terron 01 June 2006

So tender and real...a beautiful poem Dee. A ten from me. Love, Valsa

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DEE...DARTING SCRIPT...TIGHT, SMOOTH FLUX....ALL-IN -STEP RHYTHM TEN FOR THE '' MEMORY OF LOVE ''! ''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''~F. J. R.~'''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''

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Nalini Hebbar 15 May 2006

very touching...i feel so sad...love, nalini

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Mary-Elizabeth Conn 10 May 2006

10/10! I love this poem so much! Another great write! Keep up the good work :)

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Elya Thorn 01 May 2006

I will quote someone on this poem ' So beautiful it hurts' yes, yes, it's true, I feel exactly that! You have written it so well, You just made me feel every little word you said in this poem... a 10 from me! This is a masterpiece! ~~Elya Thorn~~

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Duncan Wyllie 01 May 2006

I love your style! This is free yet still conveys its message, Brilliant, Love Duncan

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Scarlett Treat 01 May 2006

Dee, I like this third poem much better than the other two. It seems a lot more mature, with a much deeper line of feeling. There are a couple commas out of place that break thoughts when they shouldn be broken, but otherwise, I like the deep feeling shown here. Get that pen and get busy...you have a talent here that is well worth working on....looking for more later!

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Chuck Audette 01 May 2006

Nice rhymes and good story! -chuck

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David Darbyshire 01 May 2006

it's certainly is a tear jerker, Dee Daff, lovely flow nice, xxx

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