Petals torn from faded roses,
Memories stored in jars.
Photographs with different poses,
To worship from afar.
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This one is very true.The memories remain sweeter, stronger when you lose your love when you are both young and very much in love.
Well crafted and very evocative. A tidy summing-up of all the pains that only love can bring. Nice work.
This is one of the best/romantic poem I've ever read on this website! And that my friend, is the TRUTH!
Dee, interesting line... love does come and go with very little effort. GREAT poem! Brian
So tender and real...a beautiful poem Dee. A ten from me. Love, Valsa
DEE...DARTING SCRIPT...TIGHT, SMOOTH FLUX....ALL-IN -STEP RHYTHM TEN FOR THE '' MEMORY OF LOVE ''! ''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''~F. J. R.~'''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''
10/10! I love this poem so much! Another great write! Keep up the good work :)
I will quote someone on this poem ' So beautiful it hurts' yes, yes, it's true, I feel exactly that! You have written it so well, You just made me feel every little word you said in this poem... a 10 from me! This is a masterpiece! ~~Elya Thorn~~
I love your style! This is free yet still conveys its message, Brilliant, Love Duncan
Dee, I like this third poem much better than the other two. It seems a lot more mature, with a much deeper line of feeling. There are a couple commas out of place that break thoughts when they shouldn be broken, but otherwise, I like the deep feeling shown here. Get that pen and get busy...you have a talent here that is well worth working on....looking for more later!
it's certainly is a tear jerker, Dee Daff, lovely flow nice, xxx
Beautifully written with such a clear and touching message Melissa x