My love for you is never ending,
And ever so true.
I will always remember the day I fell in love with you.
It was the first day I felt butterflies inside,
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I liked the clean uncomplicated exprressions you used. I feel it is the way to write poetry. If u are interested please read some of my poems on love, beauty. I am sure u like them. We are at same wave length
I gave this a 7 because it was a rather loosely organized verse. The structure could have been a bit better. The theme was clear and so was the communication, but the music never played. GW62
The reader can not fully understand how you feel when you are writing but with your poetry I think they can. I for one do.