Friday, June 13, 2008

To The Love Of My Life Comments

Rating: 3.5

My love for you is never ending,
And ever so true.
I will always remember the day I fell in love with you.
It was the first day I felt butterflies inside,
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Osvaldo Govea
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Tanya Stanford 26 August 2008

The reader can not fully understand how you feel when you are writing but with your poetry I think they can. I for one do.

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Sathyanarayana M V S 26 June 2008

I liked the clean uncomplicated exprressions you used. I feel it is the way to write poetry. If u are interested please read some of my poems on love, beauty. I am sure u like them. We are at same wave length

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Greenwolfe 1962 20 June 2008

I gave this a 7 because it was a rather loosely organized verse. The structure could have been a bit better. The theme was clear and so was the communication, but the music never played. GW62

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