Saturday, December 28, 2013

To The Girl Across The Street Comments

Rating: 5.0

You were my very first friend
With sunlit yellow hair,
which directly complimented my dark mane
We were a pair, uniquely different...
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Susan Lacovara
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Sandra Feldman 24 October 2020

Anyone who has been lucky enough to have such a beautiful and deep, lifetime friendship like this can relate to this brilliant poem, entirely. It is not only and exceptionally well written piece but the narrative flows so naturally, we just can picture it and and above all feel the evolution of the sentiments that are the protagonists of the story. So very well written and enjoyable, a real gem to remember! Sincerest congratulations.

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Belle Wassermeister 23 October 2020

Revisiting this poem from my Favorites list. Truly outstanding! I have left comments on it before but I don't see them anymore!

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Akhtar Jawad 27 August 2018

A nice birthday poem to a missing friend.

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Simone Inez Harriman 07 July 2017

A friendship that is lasting is truly valuable. I'm sure you will share good times again. Sometimes years will pass without contact however when meeting again I'm sure it will be same.

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Edward Kofi Louis 11 May 2017

Friendship! ! With the muse of life. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Tomas Prato 25 December 2016

Again, a brilliant poem from a brilliant poetess. One lonely bright shining star in the dark and dingy world of Poemhunter!

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Seamus O Brian 03 December 2016

An intimate glimpse into a bond of friendship so close that we all must envy it or fondly recall our own relationships that outgrew our hometown streets to become as grand as life itself. Compelling and engaging writing. Bravo.

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Denis Mair 25 October 2016

Judging from this, you have the knack of cherishing friendship, and that's why you were able to keep it. Friendship gives a sense of who we are. I invite you to look at my poem of remembered friendship: George and Me.

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Ellen Shaw 07 October 2016

wow! beautiful poem. Great work.

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Raymond Farrell 13 June 2015

Wow this is a truly great poem and lovely tribute to a best friend.

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Kim Barney 10 June 2015

Had to come back and read this poem again. It's excellent. I love it.

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Saniya Galeyeva 07 June 2015

True freindship lasts forever. Lucky you are to experience it. Lucky I am to experience it too. Friendship is one of my most favourite topics because true freindship for me is the only real love.

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Josey Alfred 27 April 2015

Beautiful poem, You have narrated, very clearly the memories summer days you have spent with a friend who understood you so well in your child hood and she still dwell, closely in your mind, in spite o f the long years and distance. Thanking you for sharing, love dwells in heart for ever.

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Godfrey Morris 16 February 2015

Awesome poem. You touched me with your words this is what true love is.

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Savita Tyagi 16 February 2015

Beautiful poem written for a friend. True friendship survives the test of time, distance and changing life patterns.

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Sandra Feldman 16 February 2015

A beautiful portrait of a cherished friendship that so vividly still lives in you. So well written, one feels the friendship, memories and love. Excellent, really loved it!

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Bernard Snyder 16 February 2015

Wow! Incredible poem! Thanks for sharing. A great expression of the wonderful girl across the street! ! Also, congrats on being chosen 'poem of the day'! Well deserved!

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Jayatissa K. Liyanage 16 February 2015

True friendship is absolute, I feel. An excellent tribute to true friendship. I like it.

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Jayatissa K. Liyanage 16 February 2015

True friendship is absolute, I feel. An excellent tribute to true friendship. I like it.

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Brian Stafford 16 February 2015

very nice, your friend is privileged to have a friend like you!

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