To The Fallen Comments

this is beautiful! I love it

A beautiful poem both in sentiment and construction

Very nice poem. I think I would edit it: The me they knew is dead (I would take out 'that' in the beginning of line 4.)

The others are right. A fine poem.

Very good and I can relate to it but don't think I could have expressed it so well.Gillian Commerford

Very well written, short and concise.Only we know in our hearts who we truely are, only those outside know what we choose to show them.The world is a stage and we play many characters in our interaction with our fellow man.

Vasto brilliant. The me they knew died. But the you, you know lives, beyond the poem, seeping through the pores of sky and winds. Classic.

Few words... but a big message! The inner connect is something we all pusue, the journey is very painful and ardous... but the destination very rewarding. Well writtten. Would love for you to please take out time to critique some of my poems.

Wow, I love this. I hope you find meaning to your life; with poetry like this, you deserve it

wow i tho i was deep

Wow deep. i really like this. Love if you would critique some of my poetry.