Wednesday, July 12, 2017

To the dogs of kreisau Comments

Rating: 4.3

oh the skein of raggle-taggle village dogs: trickly
tails, stubbly legs, tough teeth fletching at the fence

yours is the street, the dust on an asphalt hem
yours the resonant night in the dormant valley
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Uljana Wolf
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Deepak Kumar Pattanayak 07 August 2020

Heart goes out to those souls we often call them our friends as dogs......so beautifully scripted 10+++

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Dr Dillip K Swain 07 August 2020

Many congratulations for this brilliant poem being featured as Poem of the Day! Top score!

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Dr Antony Theodore 07 August 2020

so crying wolf you survey the cosmos of this depression dominating every route, every stranger, and me: yours is my scent trail, my brave steps yours are my calves finally out of the village- beautiful poem. lovely. tony

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Anil Kumar Panda 07 August 2020

Very nice poem. Interesting to read. Enjoyed. Thanks and congrats.

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Veronica Brusnica 07 August 2020

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Mahtab Bangalee 07 August 2020

Finest poem- yours is my scent trail, my brave steps yours are my calves finally out of the village .....dog and the life of village to urban on the path; loyal to the rules of the earth and spending time with the dignity sometimes make the life very difficult but the brave steps make the easy path to go ahead. the poet very acutely articulated the fact of life by delineating the the skein of raggle-taggle village dogs

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doug scotney 07 August 2019

great kow-tow to get out of the village

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Banamala Sen 07 August 2019

Beautiful poem, deftly portraying a village-scene with vivid word-play! Congratulations on the poem being chosen!

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Kumarmani Mahakul 07 August 2019

So touchingly delineated. Beautiful poem by Uljana Wolf is amazingly shared here.

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Ratnakar Mandlik 07 August 2019

Excellent narration of the dogs at kreisau and their domination over the area. Well deserved modern poem of the day.

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Rajnish Manga 07 August 2019

How well the subject, though commonplace, has been treated. Thanks.

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Mahtab Bangalee 07 August 2019

excellent the last couplet/// beautiful poem penned

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Andy* 07 August 2019

A great write what poetry should be and often is not

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Pranab K Chakraborty 07 August 2019

...every echo is yours, the shivering repercussion of sound from the hills, hierarchic growling... Fantastic blending of disliking and poetic manipulation. Thanks to the translator also. +++

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Haidee Majola 08 August 2018

It is a well scribed poem.

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Glen Kappy 07 August 2018

the many vivid and fresh phrases in this poem—asphalt hem, resonant night in the dormant valley, shivering repercussion, hierarchic growling—make it a small treasure chest. -gk

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Anil Kumar Panda 07 August 2018

Excellent ink. Enjoyed the word play and concept.

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Sharron Stephenson 07 August 2018

i like the words which follows and path of fun and play

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Dr Antony Theodore 07 August 2018

yours is my scent trail, my brave steps yours are my calves finally out of the village.a very good poem. tony

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Saji G. Praleyagiri. 07 August 2018

An extraordinary poem. thanks for sharing

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