To The Deserting Train … 1006-2k13 Comments

superb! ! ! it's just lovely. the whole poem is beautifully written but the ending got my whole attention. loved the intensity! ! ! it seems you have put your heart and soul into this poem.

The bottom lines exquisitely multiply the overall effect of the poem... In the deluge of love nothing is sane walk and you shall not walk in vain..... As jasmeen said smoothly glides to denouement..... Amazing.......

the unpunctuated marvellous flow of the stream of thought one might call it an unfettered free-verse, a welcome break from your consistent couplets!

Love is everything and nothing can take it away. Keep the love alive.

Feelings and emotions find their way in a finely composed poem. Irregular rhyme(unlike Saadat Tahir's other poems) flows smoothly to denouement.