To The Breeze Comments
Sing me a song
my spirits are low
Through the rustling trees,
speak to me
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This little piece is a song that is the breeze that rustles the mind's foliage. Thanks for sharing.
A little of your touch! ! Thanks for sharing this lovely poem with us.
A LITTLE OF YOUR TOUCH CAN HEAL THE SOUL: you link the worldly with the spiritual, but in an understated manner I find very persuasive. It's not in the coded language of the SUFI poets but your poem has that larger dimension. The intimacy between you and the breeze shows that connection between us humans and Nature, we are DEEPLY INTERFUSED in Nature as Wordsworth put it. Even the extreme heat of summer responds to us with a refreshing breeze.
Exposed to the oppressive suffocating heat. You speak to nature's powers and ask for just a little mercy. Not a dip in a cool crystal pool or clouds to form and block the suns red hot glare but instead just a small desire. A wish for the wind to stir the trees if only for a moment. A soothing murmur to ease your spirit. Such a small request amid this land of cracked earth and golden moaning grass. The poem left me to feel the weight of the day as the heat blurred the poetic figures before my eyes..............
Yea Edmund i like breeze more. I take evening walk n thats when i miss the breeze most. After rain it gets very still n theres this feeling of airlessness that i dont like. Thanku so much for your sterling comments.
what an expression! your ending is superb A little of your touch can heal the soul.-the poem has touched my soul. lot of thanks for sharing such a beautiful poem, .
Wonderfully written, Nosheen. A supplication to the breeze to caress your skin and cool the day
Thanku Kelly. When i walk in the evening i crave for breeze. its awfully humid here.
Hi Nosheen, Again a very nice poem from Nosheen. The parched land gasps The golden grass moans A little of your touch Can heal the soul The choice of a few simple ordinary words make the poem extraordinary: little of your touch, heal the soul', soothing murmur etc. Enjoyed reading the poem. Congrats and keep writing.
Awesome request......10+++++ Hawaon pe likhkar ye paigha aaya hai aaj kisi ka dur se salam aaya hai Kyun ruk gayi hai hawa, zara zor se chal Hamari Nosheenji ka aaj tere liye farmaan aaya hai....
Aye hawa mere sang sang chal, mere dil main hui hulchul... This is the song that came into my mind Nosheen. Beautiful poem.10
Thanku aarzoo. Its so hot n humid these days that i literally crave for breeze.
Perfect! I love it. I feel exactly the same way about the breeze. A 10
Thanku Barry. Breeze is very uplifting. I long for breeze whenever im sad.
The sun burns a glaring red....so strong lines..full of warmth Well written..
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8/14/2025 9:15:40 PM # 1.0.0
A magnificent ode to breeze! Loved the way you have composed this little piece of poetry!